I kept the edits of the editors (they appear as different colored text) because it is a wonderful example of how the editing process clarifies a thought. Of course, editing improves grammar and other elements of good writing, as well.
I especially enjoyed watching the process that produced the responses. All student contributions are recorded by Mindmeister.
Great job period 3!
The direct link is http://www.mindmeister.com/43334816/ch11-origin-euro-nation-states-black-plague-pd3
